And maybe even touch the sky
She can twist and tumble
As her mind jumbles
She can twist and turn
As she starts to learn
She can point and flex
As the skills get so complex
She can dance and twirl
As she joins a new swirl
She can clamp and cheer
So they don't land on their rear
She can rip and fall
But never gets off the ball
She can quit and leave
But gymnastics will remain in her sleeves
1. Anaphora
2. End rhyme
3. Sibilance
4. Assonance
I liked how you used anaphora.. it was kind of a cheery poem lol
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good poem. And it kind of manages to capture your personality within it.
ReplyDeleteI really like this poem Jamiee! I love how you utilized the end rhyme and anaphora, it gave the poem a very nice flow and works really well!
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